Grace and I received a good amount of feedback on our project this week. A lot of it supportive, and a lot of critiques. One of the critiques received was to change our genre from a documentary to just a movie, since it had the feel of an actual movie. Grace and I decided to change our title to fit the movie and change the genre to a dramatic tragedy. Also, during the car driving scene, if we could get some aerial shots that would look a lot better. That idea was suggested by Leah and we are going to get some more car shots. The only other critiques we received were all related to clips just being slightly different or maybe from a different angle. Also coming from Mrs. Gartland, we need to get copyright approval from the News Stations from where the clips were taken from. We are going to get permission to use the clips and maybe add a few more. This will ensure that when we submit it to Cambridge, our film is the best it can possibly be. ...